The golden retriever came up to us as he knew who we are. “That’s when I knew I should run.” Calm down Olivia the dog won’t hurt you, stop being such scaredy cat.
“Lets name him Teddy.” I say.
“Teddy has very impeccable manners.” Olivia announces. Teddy starts looking around, “I think he knows the way home.” I say.
Sure enough Teddy led us way home. “Mum!” I yell. “Sophie! your safe, I can’t believe your home, Dad and I were awfully worried about you.” Mum you won’t believe me but a golden retriever helped us find our way home, can we keep him.” “Absolutely he saved you.”
Nice work, it’s amazing how the prompts work out well for your continuing story idea.
Just one thing… the way the prompt is worded sounds more like a thought that a spoken sentence, so maybe leave it as a thought, then show your character doing or saying something, to which their friend can reply “Calm down Olivia, etc…”
Good job!