Today I’m going to the most exciting thing, I’m going to a dance competition in Adelaide. The competition starts at 12:30 so we have to get moving.
4 hours later we are going through the hills of Adelaide, I feel so excited I’ve been practicing for this for the whole year.
30 minutes later we are entering the main part of Adelaide then all of a sudden I see a huge line of cars, A traffic jam! seriously. 45 minutes later we gradually things started to move. I begged my Mum for a frothy Hot chocolate, then we started to head for the theater.
Well done on creating a suspense! I was wondering if you would make it!